Fairly Tried
Have you ever felt frustrationfor all the things you've triedthat didn't seem to amount for muchtill you felt so empty deep inside.Maybe it is my own self I blamefor all this turmoil pressing meand...
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Ah but it is good to sayYou've attempted ,failed and now cryFor sometimes it is more importantTo at least say that you tried.....dreams are seldom what they were, once you actually have one come true...
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Can I tell you something Tal, in truth I think the dream was hard to live up to. We spend three days away from the world and other people, just he and I and music. till we thought of those days as the...
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A very heartwrenching tale.Beautifully written and expressedJoin Mein the Realmof Eternal LovePanegyrize your poetry at SoulStarz Galaxy
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Dear nea, If only real life could be the stuff that dreams are made of, but have you ever noticed -- dreams are the misty illusive stuff we can't quite get hold of. You have a poet's heart and that my...
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Nea,I found so much in this that I can relate to.. I definitely have felt that same frustration for what I've attempted in life, feeling like my existence is insignificant.. and I know how suddenly...
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thank you Greeneyes, It expresses the roller coaster I have been on since we broke up....sighthank you Sig, fantasy is just that fantasy, and I love a good fantasy, but I tried to live one, and it...
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The last stanza brings it home, nea...so many unaswerable questions...very well put!Every new beginning comes from some other beginnings end...Why not try a new beginning...at The Maelstrom
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I could really relate to this Nea, beautifully expressed as always. I really enjoyed the read. Mystic~Mystic~"Spend all your time waiting for that second chance, For a break that would make it okay,...
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This is a beautiful poem Nea. It's not beautiful the pain behind the writing, but perhaps expressing it helps if only a little. I cannot even try to think of what to say that will help because I am...
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thank you Soul, Mystic, and Mike. Yes time helps a lot. This was written over a month ago, and the relationship ended sometime ago, and as time goes by it becomes easier to realize with clarity how...
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